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"Madre de Dios," she cried as she collapsed back onto him. "Dios mio, my God, Davis. It was very perfect! Ah, my God, I did cum a million times! Did you cum, Davis?"
"No, baby; I was trying to make it good for you."
She spun around and pushed at him, indicating that she wanted him to slide back up on the bed. "It was very good," she said. "I wish to do it again sometime. Now I want slow and sweet. I will ride you and make you cum. I wish I were becoming pregnant like Calley, but I am too young. Will you make me pregnant someday, Davis?"
"Yes, when you're 25 and you marry me," he told her.
"You are a great silly," she said. "What is your fascination with this 25? Why must you torture me and make me wait like this?"
"I would do it tomorrow if it was for me," he told her. "It's for you, Malina. I love you too much to let you do things I don't think are good for you. Do you trust me, kitten?"
"Yes, with my life I trust you," she said. "I thought we agreed together that I am not a kitten!"
"I know, but you are," he laughed. "You have claws. They're sharp, but just little. You're my perfect little angel, Malina. Did I mention that I love you with all my heart?"
"Yes, but you may mention this often. I wish not to talk anymore. I wish to make love to you now."
She mounted him and rested her little body on his chest, using he amazing flexibility to pump her tight moistness up and down over his straining cock until they came together, his cum filling her tight pussy until it overflowed, running down over him and matting in their hair.
They showered together and made the slow, sweet kind of love again before he wrapped her small body in his arms and they cuddled. They drifted off to sleep. Tomorrow, Calley would return. Davis would move out for the day and Malina would have Calley all to herself. Perhaps Calley was already pregnant. The future was very uncertain, but they knew that the three of them could face whatever came together; the nation of Rade, De la Vega and Nebrija.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 1 month agoHow cerebral about a great social meltdown. Could another writer's invitational be about global climate change Armageddon? The research, brainstorming and creativity would be enlightening.
Sir Galahad4 months agoI congratulate you on a truly original plot device for getting your story into the post-SHTF situation with a minimum amount of verbiage and a realistic assessment of how quickly allegedly civilized Americans can revert to a tribal or lower level of socialization. Quite a change from the typical nuclear war, biological holocaust, solar electromagnetic pulse, or overpowering alien invasion that normally serve as the jumping-off point.
You did not really discuss the possible changes from a legally mandated monogamous culture to a polyamorous one; nor did you get into the issue of where all the good guys on the ranches around Davis's place, who seem to be decent sorts, are going to find women. You also did not make it clear if there had been an urban collapse that had the urban dwellers with no survival skills, no money, no weapons, no equipment, and no useful training flee their citified environment to be enslaved or murdered, or if they simply died in droves when their world collapsed around them. If you do a sequel, perhaps from the point of view of Angus of the Z Bar Ranch, it would be interesting to have Angus, advised by Davis and Calley, launch some sort of an expedition to see about bringing some sane (as opposed to brainwashable religious fanatic type) women back to the Z Bar and other ranches populated by decent, pragmatic people. The amateur radio setup mentioned in passing might be a means to see about locating other survivor/survivalist enclaves. You might also see about finding a military unit run by civilized officers and sergeants trying to reconstitute the United States of America.
In any case, a really great read and a good work of world-building that you can be proud of.
Anonymousover 1 year agoWow the second story I could not stop reading Another epic from you mate Wish all your stories were as great as this one and thEye in the sky Keep up the GREAT work (jaybee186)
Anonymousabout 2 years agoI can't believe that your stories are so different with such a broad spectrum. Remarkable to read western style genre with urban and rural styled environments. Your characters have unique names and ethnicities.
Quite a chameleon in storytelling and fun to read.
Thank you for multitalents, and your teamwork with your collaborations.
dirtywhiteboy67over 2 years agoExcellent story. Not only is it hot, it also seems very realistic to me. I just wish that I could be as well prepared for what is coming as Davis and his neighbor.
bdsmbillover 2 years agoWonderful story, and very well written. I say that as a retired professor of English and writing and a published author. You have talent! Just one note on the canning: Acidic or very sweet foods like tomatoes or jam can be water bath canned like you describe. Foods like green beans must be pressure canned or you can get botulism.
Anonymousover 2 years agoHi Randi.
This is excellent action filled story with cowboy-flavored situations and set in a world that is upside down due to loss of societal and economic structure. Are you a prophet suggesting that we are moving toward this type of future IRL? Is there enough here for the reader to think: is this what we need to prepare for?
As usual, thank you for the very hot and erotic descriptions in a threesome environment; it presents interesting and unusual aspects. If there is a follow up to this story, please consider twins to each of the two women?
This story contains so many realistic notations IRL that it increases the credibility of the whole story. And while we are at it, why not include another character: a John Wayne type of savior showing up with guns blazing!
Congratulations on your creation of the character called Reverend King. I am not sure I would have been able to write the crazy horse manure that the Reverend is dishing out to his congregation in the story. Again, congratulations!
BJ
Anonymousover 2 years agoIt is a very good story but it is not good that you stopped and did not finish!!! Many other authors do the same thing and it really pisses me off! If all of you authors figure you a good enough author to start a story, then you would be a better writer if you would finish the damn story!
laughdruidover 2 years agoI love this story and would wish for many more chapters. All of your stories are the best.
