All Comments on 'Montreal Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
On the wild side

Written like a true veteran of wild and kinky sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
What a message :-)

Thanks for such a delightful story. Makes me hard for a message from a shemale now.

I think I'd switch it up and have her pull out of my ass remove her condom and move around to bury her she cock in my mouth for me to swallow her cream.

BTW your ass in your profile picture sure looks deliciously spankable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Awful

Multiple typos in the first paragraph. And you refer to trans women as "he." Didn't even bother reading the rest. Complete trash

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Cool!

Great story, nothing better than a guy with breasts!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

I didn't bother to finish reading the story.. It was to distracting and confusing when you address the reader in the story with phrases like " Ican tell you". Save yourself the hassle telling the story by not addressing the reader. They typos I could deal with until they got to be too much. Try using a neutral word such "T-girl". If you had referred to me as a shemale I wouldn't have anything to do with you. I'm not in the porn industry and think of myself better than that.

SiamKittSiamKittabout 2 years ago

As a UK 80's band once sang..."These are the things, these are the things, the things that dreams are made of.."

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