All Comments on 'Moonlight and Warm Sand Ch. 01'

by Hidalgo1001

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LordSlamdawgg almost 8 years ago

Written very well but ultimately a bit too graphic for my demographic

As a fantasy, this struck me as whimsical and yet intense. The other comments seem to see this through the ' page torn from a journal ' prism. I personally didn't care for aftermath Hurricane Katrina ravaged pussy closeup, but this story wasn't written for me. I thank the author for sharing and hope the story finds its intended audience.

Anonymousalmost 8 years ago

good LW story

SharedSigne almost 8 years ago

I'm conflicted

It didn't really turn me on but you tried. Keep trying, it wasn't that bad. I gave it three stars.

Anonymousalmost 8 years ago

Extremely good story.

Can hardly wait for the next chapter. 5*

Hidalgo1001 almost 8 years agoAuthor

Lordslumdawgg

I have read your comment, and see your point about Hurricane Katrina. I believe that what I was attempting to convey was more the psychological effect it was having on her, knowing that she would have to explain it to her husband in the very near future.

I believe that Chapter 2 (currently pending) will add some perspective to this condition.

heartsurge almost 8 years ago

Keep Writing: Look forward to chapter2. 5*****

Great job for a first effort.Ignore the inevitable critics who are always threatened by a very Hot Wife pursuing her needs. I look forward to the next chapter, to your hubby encountering his Hot Wife's stretched cunt and newfound needs (about which I hope you'll be very firm and clear, but loving) and to your meeting "the Big Guys" on Thursday night. Keep writing, PLEASE