All Comments on 'Moonlit Visitor'

by RoseDarkfire

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CelticAngelsCelticAngelsover 12 years ago
more

Please tell me there is more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
MORE!!!

I must agree - add more to this amazing story

Faerie_CupcakeFaerie_Cupcakeover 12 years ago
More please

I would also like to read more of this :)

RoseDarkfireRoseDarkfireover 12 years agoAuthor
More to come

Im working on adding more to this story everyone. Im glad to hear that it is liked

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

You need an editor to make this even better, it's 'shudder' not 'shutter' a shutter is something that covers a window, that's only one of the things, you need more commas...

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
CLOSED OR OPEN

a new beginning is needed. TK U MLJ LV NV

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