All Comments on 'More Than Just Dancing...'

I actually looked for some local authors and yours is the only one in a category I've got any interest in reading. So thats how I came across your piece.

I like the gist of your plot. And your writing is pretty good but I'm not a fan of a first person narrative. It saves on character development. Still, you can't please everyone all the time. One the whole I liked your story. I hope you keep submitting, (pun intended) more of your work.

You are very talented... and very creative. Hope to read more like this from you.

-Anna

Great detail and buildup to the climax.... of the story:)