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"Nobody wants to read about us over-thinking and planning and making a schedule," she said, "They want to read about how you pull your huge cock out and take my tight little mommy ass again."
At this point, the story was so off the rails that I obviously had to start over. I figured some people would like to see this out-of-control sequence, though, so I saved it to share with you.
- COMMENTS
Contrahentabout 2 years agoAbsolutely hilarious outtake. When I started reading, I figured you'd go in a different direction than you did in the main storyline. Kind of an alternate universe thing. I laughed when mom broke the 4th wall.
beardedbandit62over 2 years agoI really enjoyed the crazy out of control parts. Your a great writer. Thank you for your work. Stay safe and healthy please.
WPBFLDAVEover 3 years agoYou are a great writer! That had to be said. This story line is one of my favorites and the characters are well developed. Who doesn't like "hot" nurses? We enjoyed the tease although a continuing series would be greatly appreciated. I've said this before to you although anonymously, that your story could be on cable, possibly HBO or some after-dark channel. People would pay to see... I definitely would.
Please write some more of this when you have time. I hope you are doing well during these Covid-times... Dave.
Ironman52almost 4 years agoI felt this story was a set of panels in "Bloom County". Not the commercial version... The University of Texas campus paper version before the author, Breathed, graduated. and syndicated.... So much fun!
GrantLeeStoneover 5 years agoI really like the idea of having ONE character break the fourth wall to comment directly about the story! It’s a funny joke. It’s a Deadpool/Ambush Bug type joke. So it won’t work if multiple characters do it, or if you overplay the joke. But it is literally funny, and can be clever when used sparingly.
