All Comments on 'Morning Ritual'

BDSM at best and weak at that

Rubbish. Barely BDSM and most certainly not incest/taboo.

It takes time to develop characters and storylines but I enjoyed the erotic element of spanking his daughters. That intimate expression made me want more details so I encourage you to keep writing. Thank you!

If all of this is continued, it could be hot and erotic. May be. I love spanking stories.

Truly trash!

This is pure fetish/fantasy of someone who wants to, or already does, discipline his wife and/or girlfriend and children via spanking.

You may like it, or not, but it certainly isn't literature of any form.

I think you need to get a good spanking yourself. Your amateurish BDSM stories truly suck.

This is totally in the wrong genre. This should be categorized under fetish. SMDH.

Why doesn't he fuck them and them spank them for letting him?

I don't know what you are leading up to.

You are one sick asshole.

Although it’s not really for me if you continue I could be very good but what you have now is just page 1 if chapter 1 of a story

Frankly, I'm surprised it's not even lower.

Excelent story Anda .... more of these please

More please. It’s too short and you need to add more details to make the story more exciting to the readers. Hope to see your next chapter soon!

Pointless

Is this just a precise of a story, it reads like the jottings, an outline of what is intended to be a completed work.