All Comments on 'Mother Earth'

It caught my attention for some reason, and my approval for good reason.

The idea of a mortal man mating & having a child with an ethereal female being is my cup of tea. I can't help but wonder what the child will be like as he matures. Will he have superhuman powers a la Hercules, Aeneas & Achilles? Perhaps you could write a sequel from the son's POV, set at least 18 years after this story. Oh, & what a coincidence you chose the name "Jonathan Price" for the protagonist; an actor by the name of Jonathan Pryce (with a "y") portrayed Elizabeth Swann's father in the "Pirates of the Caribbean" movie trilogy.

A very weird storyline but very creative. Good luck in the contest.

It is an open ended story and that strikes me as it's only weakness. I liked it.

Good luck in the contest.

Nice. And like the others might have noticed, it's strange to have heard of a Titan being spoke of in such a way. A mortal man with a Titan is hard for the Greeks to imagine; I bet they aren't going to like this story very much! :P

An excellent story I commend u on ur writing skills