All Comments on 'Mother Examining Son'

by fasthand

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
OUTSTANDING!!!

GREAT START TO A NEW SERIES. KEEP IT GOING.

lone_wolf716lone_wolf716about 7 years ago
A Great Start

Looks like fun and games are yet to begin. Bring on more Chapter's....

sabra16023sabra16023about 7 years ago
Outstanding Story

Waiting for more chapters. Thanks

lantern04lantern04about 7 years ago
I like it.

Well done. I look forward to seeing future chapters.

mammoetmammoetabout 7 years ago
great

keep them cumming

live4thebjlive4thebjabout 7 years ago
Reminds me

When my sister went to nursing school and did some examinations on me.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
super hot

after the shower she might need to learn how to milk the prostate with a strapon

rodavrodavabout 7 years ago
Very exciting

Very exciting story. After the shower, as the mom said she needs some more help if he didn't mind. Hope it will be that the mom have some itch deep inside her womb that need scratching. She asks the son to insert his finger inside her but the itch is way deep inside. So she ask him to insert his penis to rub it but said that there should be no malice on this and said that he don't make any ideas that what they are doing is intercourse, it is just for him to help her scratch that itch as she lovingly smiled at him.

starbanestarbaneabout 7 years ago

Very nice. Looking forward to future chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Gloves

Use gloves and stockings in ur story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Yep Keep Goin'

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great

Have a sister come home from college and have a threesome

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
keep goin

This is a good story. Keep going. Consider describing the hot Mom in more detail, her ass, legs, pussy and keep going with those nipples! Great job!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Interesting premise

Curious to see where you go with this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Keep going with this man, oh man you could literally go anywhere with this. hoping for more

NesticNesticabout 7 years ago
So, so hot.... Wowww

Your story is so incredibly HOT ... Wowwwwww Please go on with more chapters and coming....

horny2doithorny2doitabout 7 years ago

Yes, so many possibilities! We sure do like this chapter and hope they're more than 1 new chapter. Mom got as hot as her son did and she sure gave him one heck of an exam. Hopefully, she'll want him to help her relieve any tension she has. This will have many possibilities and hopefully, they'll explore them all and her son will give her what she hasn't gotten for a very long time. I cannot wait for more! Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Please strapon or anal fisting.

jsmangisjsmangisabout 7 years ago
More Please!

Perhaps mother and son can become lovers?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
wow

bum job nice

my wife did this to me once, i shot my cum so much

phobosukphobosukabout 7 years ago
Hot story

but you must continue...please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
More!

I think there should be a lot more chapter and maybe a sister and aunt come into it at different chapters? A bit of Public stuff.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Loved it!

Moving along nicely. Can't wait for more!

chytownchytownabout 7 years ago
Very Original****

What a funny story. I can not say personally that it was a hot story. Prostate exams are just not sexy to me. Thanks for sharing this fun read. I would read a part 2.

fasthandfasthandabout 7 years agoAuthor
Feedback from readers

Thanks for the feedback from all. I wanted to a story a bit different from all of the other mother/son stories. Suggestions are duly noted & many are helpful. One or two must be reading my mind. LOL!

MomspankerMomspankerabout 7 years ago
Great

Could care less about the "&". If thats the only complaint then ignore them. Great story. Please go to chapter 2

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
An Anony Asshole

who reads and then criticizes an interesting and well written erotic (or porn) Mother/Son relationship story, which is very appropriate for this site, needs to have his imagined editorial "rights" restricted, rejected, thrown-out!!!1CAD

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

try to make your stories to at least 2-3 pages on here. Your scores will be higher and the readers will be able to get into the story much better before the story ends. This was a good start for a series.

nadinephillipsnadinephillipsabout 7 years ago
great start....when can we expect chapter 2?

good job, looking for what follows a prostate exam......I love it write on......

Nadine

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
At the risk of offending a biker...

...which I've made it a goal to avoid, successfully so far. I too believe that an editor or capable proof reader is an excellent idea to assist all writers in smoothing out any rough edges, spelling, and/or grammatical mistakes. However, as a FREE ONLINE EROTICA SITE the material is provided without any payment to the authors, they are amateurs with varying degrees of ability and readers must adjust their standards accordingly. This story was well written in plot and style, and while I am looking forward to reading the additional chapters, I seriously doubt anyone would classify or expect any of the stories here to meet the standards of "proper writing"!

JDoyleTexJDoyleTexabout 7 years ago
More "procedures" please

I'm with Nadine, there are some more good labs to practice. Should say though, if he was laying on her lap, her fingers would curl downward, toward his scrotum, not upward toward his tailbone. Yes, it works.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
MORE PLEASE!

MORE PLEASE!!M

Bilko98Bilko98over 6 years ago
More more more

Fabulous story. Keep her practicing on him. She's every boy's kind of mum. Got a rare wood out of my old cock.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
PleaSe!!!.... Continue!!!!!

Awesome story...

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Home Run

Great story, really hits close to home, I had a great life growing up with just my mother

chytownchytownover 5 years ago
Hot Read****

Thanks for sharing.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aover 2 years ago

Unusual story but extremely erotic.

soul71soul71about 2 years ago

Umm, could you not write out the word 'and'? If you're going to write a story you have to be formal in your writing and using '&' constantly isn't formal, it's lazy. You might also want to work on separating your dialogue and not mashing two different peoples words into one making it appear as if its the same speaker it confuses the reader. Just an fyi.

ingaroberts1ingaroberts1over 1 year ago

Another beautifully described, erotic engagement that seems completely natural and intensely sexual. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Super super hot!!!

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