All Comments on 'Movie with Sis'

Where did the gag come from?

A sock as a blindfold? Either that's an enormous sock, or she has a tiny head.

" It is been a long time" - It HAD been or IT HAS been.

"20 minutes" - "twenty minutes"

" my horn honks " - "I honk my horn." Horns can't honk themselves.

And yeah, that's one long sock.

"but below eye level reminding you I don't like being questioned" - What does that mean?

"Finally I lose my temper and give your thigh an open hand smack so loud a car next to us hears." - "Open-handed." And do cars have ears? Or is it the person IN the car who hears this?

" until I come across your face with an open palm and almost knock you off the couch." He's coming on her face? His hand ejaculates?

You might want to talk to someone about your sick-fuck fantasies.

Reported for rape.

I have to say that this is poorly written and wasn't proof read by anyone

That is as polite a comment that I can leave.

wow........ never seen a story on literotica that is this badly written

Totally unreadable. My 4th grader writes better stories.

what a load of crap, give it up you will never be able to write anything good.