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"Okay honey. You're absolutely right."

"And no sex until you get checked out. I can only imagine what that woman exposed you to."

"I'll get checked out tomorrow. Can I stay here tonight?"

"Can you keep your hands and, more importantly, your dick to yourself?"

"I promise."

"Okay, come on. We'll tell everyone tomorrow. Mom keeps telling me to give you another chance. She'll be thrilled."

"She always liked me."

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A Very Brief Epilogue

Fortune was smiling on me. I tested clean and I was between Laurie's legs the night I got the test results. We clicked as we always had, and I knew I was right where I belonged.

Marriage planning began the day after she accepted my proposal, but the date was set a year away and I was told in no uncertain terms that it would be postponed if I didn't keep up my end of the counseling bargain. The threat was unnecessary since I wanted to be well-adjusted as much for myself as anyone, so I was an eager participant.

I actually ran into Rayanne again about 3 months after the wedding. Well, Laurie and I did. We were having dinner at a local steakhouse when she and her hubby came in...and they each had dates with them. I thought they were just out with another couple but soon learned I was wrong. They saw us on the way in and stopped at our table to make introductions, but when they got seated Rayanne was all over the other guy and Carl was getting busy with the other woman. To each his own, I guess.

Oh, and the steak dinner was to celebrate the news that Laurie was pregnant. We'd been to the doctor that day and gotten the final confirmation. I was looking forward to the life that now lay before me, and more immediately to the private celebration Laurie promised we'd have later.

Life is good.

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AnonymousAnonymous11 days ago

The little head and the big head were not on the same page. Enjoyed it BG.

somewhere east of Omaha

AnonymousAnonymous16 days ago

Great story. On many levels. Laurie's comment about him needing to go to counseling because an epiphany after f$cking the rown bike doesn't qualify was absolutely priceless. 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymous21 days ago

What a really exceptional piece of work. Well composed, actually a bit believable except for the fact thar Rayanne is not a festering cesspool of diseases. I mean, endless, anonymous, untested dicks at a pornstore glory hole? And all that while still in college. There is simply no way an acknowledged slut isn't going to pick up something to rot her cunt to some degree.

I did appreciate our mc's final redemption and release from the sluts emotional confinement.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

"But listen carefully, okay? You need to see a counselor of some kind to deal with this, okay. I don't think an epiphany after a fuck session with the town bike qualifies as proper emotional recovery."

=====> fantastic line. And the critics who bash this story are laughable. Either they didn't read it, or are incel trolls. Seriously what did Laurie do wrong? Yeesh.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

My comment is that this story doesn’t warrant a comment.

newfordnewford4 months ago

Have read a lot better from this author

SeaChangerSeaChanger4 months ago

MC seems lost forever ...

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

A nice well written piece of crap. 3 stars.

Bill S

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

For the discerning reader who checks the comments to see if the MC is a beta cuck before reading, beware. This horseshit will make you loose confidence in men. Avoid this.

1/5

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Another doofus MC that gets led around by other women. What loser would hook up with a chick that cheated on him for months? She just shows up out of the blue after years and simp boy jumps the moment she tells him to? Weak ass dude

lc69hunterlc69hunter7 months ago

He should have married Rayanne

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Testing clean is like trying to close the stable door after the horse has bolted. Safe sex is being thoughtful for all parties before sex. No wonder STDs in general are on the rise. Yuk.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Well written , as always . But not a great story .

A very well used plot with the usual characters . Nothing new added , nothing to really comment on .

Average at best .

DK . 3 * . Thanks for posting .

Oatmeal1969Oatmeal19699 months ago

That slut character was incredibly selfish and careless of her effect on others, well created.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Great story. Heartfelt. Seeing what Rayanne really was, made him get his head out of his ass. Laurie was great. Some of her dialog was great especially the one involving the town bike. Lol.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I know from bitter experience all about loving a woman who is no good but everyone has to have an epiphany sooner or later; I know I did but I arrived at it of my own accord rather than spending more time than necessary blaming myself for her disgusting behaviour.

Mark has found a good 'un in Laurie so let's hope he pulls his head out of his arse long enough to appreciate what he has.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I liked Laurie. Nor the MC so much.

"I was sure she was going to tell me how inadequate I had been so she needed to have sex with someone else. In fact, I'd been such a disappointment that she'd needed two men just to make up for how bad I was."

=====> his logic seems twisted. In fact she is just a woman who thinks with her vagina.

AA82ndAAAA82ndAA11 months ago

The M/C seems to be able to score with many women. The town bike...How could a man who has this track record be hung up for 5 years on the town bike cheating on him. Also why not some professional help when he realized he was having confidence and trust issues. On a positive note the story was well written and told so 4/5 to the writer.

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