All Comments on 'Moving In'

Well on you! Feckin beautiful. I've not had a story give me the horn like that in quite some time.

You finally got one right, even if it started out as a "rape" finish. Much better than your prior "mushy" efforts

I have come to look forward to your almost daily submissions as a pleasant respite after wading through a pile of mostly nuisance emails. Your repertoire is truly impressive! And what a relief to find a writer who knows the difference between breath and breathe, taut and taught, etc.