All Comments on 'Moving In Pt. 02'

This played to me on so many levels, and made me think about my own older brother. I really, truly enjoyed this. Please keep writing!

i adored this. the passion between them was palpable, and the sense of excited romance was extra arousing to me personally, a refreshing change from the more animalistic, cheesy stuff.

It was definitely shorter than I wanted, but I read the first installment and enjoyed that as well. Please keep going!

The author perfectly captured lust, love and commitment. Congratulations.

What can I say its sexy, hot, and erotic! Great short story! :-)

Not much to add but a wish for more in the series!

5* of course!

I truly loved this. More powerful and punchy than some of the cheesy taboo stories I see here. I agree, I wish it were longer, but this was a strong little vignette that got me going.

Such an awesome story! It was so beautiful and really hot. Good work! :)

That was a good conclusion.