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Randall, and Kwame looked heavenward. They both sensed something, but were unsure of what. Even miles away, the two men shared a connection. "Poppa," one of his sons yelled, snapping Randall from his reverie. He laughed and joined his sons.
"Dad, tell Kiya to stop." Keon called, calling Kwame back from his daydreams. Both men smiled and simply enjoyed their children.
THE END (For Now)
I certainly hope you enjoyed this last chapter of Alexia's story. It seemed to be about more people than just Alexia. I have an overactive imagination.
This story has helped me so much. By writing it, I was able to release some hidden pain. It was cathartic. It's hard to believe that a few months ago, I really thought I'd never be able to write again. Well, thanks to you all for your support and feedback, I know that now I can. This story is not perfect, and I'm sure there are some that have certain opinions, and that's ok. I wrote this story because I needed to write this story.
I've already started Declan and Evangeline's story. "Still Waters" is the working title. It might change. I'll work on it and post as soon as it's ready and good enough.
Thanks to everyone who has taken time to read my offerings and helped me through this hard time. I truly appreciate it.
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 4 years agoLove this story. This Story is truly a testament to the trials of life that shapes us into the strong young men and women we are destined to be. Glad u’re back with us. Good luck and love ya.V
Anonymousabout 6 years agoI really liked this addition to the series. I can't wait for still waters and I would really love to see if you can do something with Randellum's and Akeemo's offspring like you alluded to at the end.
Daniellaxmjtsabout 6 years agoI am happy that you are able to overcome your pain and things that haunted you, truly. I am glad for the more frequent chapters as well.
Some constructive criticism, some parts of the story seemed rushed. Also, please find someone to proof read your work, as the spelling and grammar errors are close to atrocious. Very difficult to read in places. Yet your gift as a storyteller should continue to be developed, happy writing.
Rheamistressabout 6 years agoWhat a way to spend an early Sunday morning. Coffee in hand, the sun finally coming through the fog. IR2R... you have done it again. Wrapping up all the ends with the beginnings of two new story lines. I still see a third one in the works as well.. Keep that imagination going. And if you run out of ideas? I got a few for you. Much love and respect to you.
willieoneabout 6 years agoI enjoy all your stories and this one was just as awesome and now I look forward to your next amazing tale. Take your time we will be here when you are ready to post it.
