All Comments on 'Moving Wendy'

WOW GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE! :)

One thing you cannot do is leave it there! Seems obvious they will go on from there - let us follow them.

The other thing is - check for a few small editing errors.

Lucas

This story is perfect for a continuation. Very good...please write more!

I sure hope you didn't spend more than 30 minutes writing this boring excuse for a story. Can you say "PREDICTABLE!"? <eyeroll>

Leave writing to writers, retard.

You did a good job here. But don;t stop now, carry it on for a while. Enter maybe some of her new friends?

bad, because there are characters with the depth of a sheet of paper and a plot which is even shallower. For me reading this was a complete waste of time.

Love the use of the language she used when talking to her father.. turns me on to no end.. Great story, keep writing.

I hope you write more chapters He is a lucky man

It is ALWAYS hot when the daughter compares herself to mom, and daddy chooses the daughter! Great story!

Sure wish I could be Wendy with her daddy/ I too fantasized about my dad

wendy is a lucky girl, im jealous!