All Comments on 'Mr. Black'

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traci_eliottraci_eliotover 13 years ago

As Mr Sinatra once sang: Love is Lovelier, the Second Time Around. I am so pleased these two met again. Thank you for a quite delightful story.

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 13 years ago
Powerful and arousing

Thank you

ZottedZottedover 13 years ago
I enjoyed the story and imagery.

Editing could have been more thorough, however. "Your" as opposed to "you're" was used throughout, which was a little jarring. Please keep writing!

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