All Comments on 'Mr. Fuckability Ch. 01'

Intriguing!! Great start, please continue ..

Please continue.

it is great so far

Intriguing - looking forward to Ch.2

Thank you to everyone who has voted and left feedback. Chapter 2 has just been submitted and will hopefully be posted soon. I welcome all feed back and appreciate all your thoughts on my submissions! Thanks for stopping by and taking the time to read! :)

This you lady sounds like my soul mate! Her disastrous night at the bar and all the funny things happening sound like scenes from my life.

You have a very engaging young innocent here and I cannot wait to read the next chapter(s) to enjoy her adventures. Please keep writing

I really like the humour in this and in a very short time you have set up two very appealing characters that I want to know more about. And hot damn, there's another chapter to read!!! Yay! Great writing

Ouch!

I am in love with your writing! Like looooooove! And I'm in love with clumsy, sweet Danni and you write her so well! I loved what happened in this chapter and I can't wait to devour the rest of the chapters! So excited!

Favorite line: They can fit through the god damn windows. Love your writing!