All Comments on 'Mr. Fuckability Ch. 01'

Favorite line: They can fit through the god damn windows. Love your writing!

I am in love with your writing! Like looooooove! And I'm in love with clumsy, sweet Danni and you write her so well! I loved what happened in this chapter and I can't wait to devour the rest of the chapters! So excited!

Ouch!

I really like the humour in this and in a very short time you have set up two very appealing characters that I want to know more about. And hot damn, there's another chapter to read!!! Yay! Great writing

This you lady sounds like my soul mate! Her disastrous night at the bar and all the funny things happening sound like scenes from my life.

You have a very engaging young innocent here and I cannot wait to read the next chapter(s) to enjoy her adventures. Please keep writing

Thank you to everyone who has voted and left feedback. Chapter 2 has just been submitted and will hopefully be posted soon. I welcome all feed back and appreciate all your thoughts on my submissions! Thanks for stopping by and taking the time to read! :)

Intriguing - looking forward to Ch.2

Please continue.

it is great so far

Intriguing!! Great start, please continue ..