All Comments on 'Mr. Maleus'

Well, this was just wicked fun and what a way to face your fears! I'm relieved that Mr. Maleus left Rosie in one piece, if not a little more experienced and hopefully a bit wiser. Will he being making the rounds, revisiting other little girls fully grown, who he tormented during childhood?

~Luna

Really enjoyed that one !!!

Well conceived and presented .

Great Fun !

More Please ???

The short story is the hardest type of story to write well. This is one of the best I have seen. Kudos and congrats, please write more.

I think you should write more very creative and a different take on the boogeyman.

Thats a genial way to get rid of old fears.:D

Good job!