All Comments on 'Mrs. Hanson Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Ah well...

I enjoyed the story right up until the point where she stuffed a dildo in his ass, then the story was ruined.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Kinda misfiled

Ya... it's incest... a bit, but it's really more anal than incest, and perhaps intentionally, but it's hard to tell, really, it's even more humor and satire. There are more cliches and bad euphemisms (massive Winnebagos!?) than a cheesy teen-stroke 70's soft porn. Moderately hot story, kinda ruined by the camp.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Not crazy about the dildo up the ass

But still, a fun series. I hope you keep it going.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
good up to a point

you spoiled it when you brought the strap on out and used it on the guy instead of the daughter no straight guy would let any female fuck him up the ass. that completly ruine it for me. you should of had the moyher do her dauhter after all susie said she wanted to try dp. i doubt jonny would of mtned if joy fuck susie while he did her ass.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
I love mom in Susie's cheerlearer outfit

That was so hot having mom dress in Susie's cheer outfit. Then then getting a blow job under the table....Hope Susie and mom dress in French Maid outfits with garter belts and corsets and Johnny can cum all over their faces and clothes

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Great

For me the part with the strapon was ok.

It could have been handled a bit more sensous.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Great Story

Great story, but like some other comments, you spoiled it when you had him take it up the ass. Hope to read the next chapter very soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Great story

only part i didn't much care for was when the mother practically raped him at the end would have much more loved to see the mom use it on susie's pussy than his ass

BfreetorunBfreetorunover 11 years ago
A very good sex story...

With a lot of downplayed humor. I appreciated that, too, as well as the sex. I will make it a favorite story.

chytownchytownover 7 years ago
To Be Continued***

Is he going to jail for kicking moms ass for raping his butt?

MartyMBMartyMBover 6 years ago
Really?

"tight lips of her butthole"? Really? I think you've just invented a new body part.

The other commenters are right. The entire story was very loving, up until the end. Then you turned it into an ass rape. The strap-on scene happened too quickly with hardly any forethought. There was no love or caring in that act.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I liked ok except the dildo up Johnny's ass. I do wish when I was a teenager have an older woman teach how to make love to a woman.makes for better fucking

SatyrDickSatyrDickabout 1 year ago

[10.02.23]

Ssspicy Series!

11/10!!!11

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