All Comments on 'Mum! You Whore 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Couldn't Get Past Page 1/2!!

This is just a plainly, stupid, adolescent fantasy; poorly written, boring and so one-dimensional a comic book would be literature in comparison. Go back to serving burgers, and stop touching yourself in public!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Fantastic story, just needs comas and name specification when people quote. Had to guess most of the time who was talking to who and who the "I/me" is.

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