All Comments on 'Music Man Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Terrific..5+ stars!!

Keep the chapters coming as this is another of your great stories! !

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Such high ratings, but no comments?

Convenient how the woman who loved him so deeply not only cut off all communication, then turned into an unprincipled slut, and thief. So why didn't Cassie's dad approach Cassie and Zak about helping with the payments? They sure stole plenty of money from Ged. But in a way, Cassie's stupidity makes more sense, seeing that she was raised by stupid parents. Really, you mortgage your house to pay for a wedding, to a man they did not approve of? And of course the biggest question of all, how did Cassie go from finding her soul mate and the man of her dreams, to falling back into the clutches of a philandering whore hound, lying cheating asshole? Like Cassie has no since of ethics, morals, character? Of course Ged should send Zak a Thank You card, for saving him from such a shallow cruel stupid woman. Ged's children will be much more intelligent and better raised with Cassie having no contribution to their genes and no influence on their characters. Good riddance!

TrtrolesTrtrolesover 8 years ago
Five stars

Nice,nice. Cant wait to finish it.

This bothers me- Cassie so easly went with Zac. First kiss,then date and then marriage.

Your stories always have some twist and I hope this one have it too. Maybe little Marrie will finish with him :)

rightbankrightbankover 7 years ago
another well written addition to the series

But the more we know about the characters the harder it is to like them. Ged professes his need to take it slow, develop a relationship, getting to know her first, and then in less time than it takes to walk home his is in love and in bed, again, and again, and again. Cassie. Well, if he decides to let her back into his life I will be very disappointed. oh well, I'm just a reader, not the author.

What ever happened to the album he did while in L.A.? Has Furtive Glance imploded?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Love the story...

I'm pretty certain we'll find that Zac stole the money and it's probably all spent now. She'll rue the day she married that loser, but I'm hoping you don't have Ged get back together with her. Besides, I figure a baby will show up soon, right? Give Ged a good woman to marry. And I don't blame him at all for sleeping with a few women once he got back. Good grief, his fiance dumped him and married another man. He's free and clear of the slut. Good riddance to bad rubbish.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
A fool

Sigh, why am in seeing a RaaC in the making. No drama in the break up, why is he paying for the wedding. Cassie fell so fast, Marie was a slut, Zac is a thief, the parents who the fuck knows, but he is bailing them out. Not really liking the characters much

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