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All Comments on 'My Adventures in the Rose Garden'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Language problems

There is nothing wrong with the premise of the story, but I found the way you set it up confusing and hard to understand, mainly due to weird grammar and lots of messed-up figures of speech. The actual description of the sex scene on the other hand was very well written, despite the gross content.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

Greg has nothing on that!

Aemilia_NyxAemilia_Nyxalmost 14 years ago

It was very different and not what i was expecting at all. Knowing you though, it shouldn't have been too surprising. I love your crazy imagination! I found some parts to be quite amusing as well. Overall it was a great submission, and I look forward to reading more of your stories soon!

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August, 2012: I'm getting paid to write stories now, and as much as I love the idea of art for art's sake, I love money too. Between school, training and paid writing gigs, my free erotica writing hours are few to none. However, I try to give back to the community by leaving c...