by BarbieLez
No need to be afraid of negative comments with writing as good as this. I'd like to see how the idea of the dream/fantasy develops. I especially like the ability to use a 'real' situation to trigger fantasy without all the usual contortions of reality that are necessary. Very nice...
You hinted that there were more themed alike?
Just one suggestion - these would also make great longer stories with a little more character development work though the sex is great without the preamble!
That was outstanding! Great premise. Great delivery. Can't wait for the follow up.
This is a fantasy that all of us have enjoyed at one time, or another, whether gay, straight, bi, or whatever! Thanks for bringing it back to life! By the way, I also love your moniker, too!