All Comments on 'My Big Balls and Cock'

The only thing missing is "The End"

Thanks for your constructive criticism.

Grow the fuck up!

I agree with Written by a 12 year old and this certainly doesntt belong in ROMANCE.

For starters I'll try not to be a dick but rather give constructive criticism

The story

It really is well... weak, it could use some elaboration and certainly the thought of them moving in together just like that is somewhat... unrealistic to say the least...(try visualize the conversation and situation happening in real life... if it sounds absurd it probably is)... and that could be fine but if its going to be that kind of read then you might as well fix the other point...

The sex

Usually a good sex scene has details explaining the feelings both physical and emotional which can be very hot and sensual... also, being direct like "I shoved my cock in her" just comes off crude rather mentioning it through metaphor and/or blending it with details and romanticism works great...

hope it helps cheers

Awesome story. So romantic and emotional!!