My Brown Eyed Girl Pt. 03

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When Jodie returned with two Cokes and a bowl of water for Dog, Melissa was lying on the couch with her feet on the other armrest. She had the dildo halfway inside and a studied expression on her face as she manipulated it. When Jodie put the bowl on the floor Melissa looked sideways as she pulled her feet back.

"So, did you really sit up watching lesbian videos?" Jodie sat down.

"Yeah, not much else to do around here. I wanted to know more about what lesbians do in bed, mom caught me watching it but she didn't seem to care too much."

"So, what happens now?" Jodie handed her a Coke.

"How's about we sleep on it," Melissa opened the can, "we can have the famous morning after the night before talk but right now I just wanna lie here and play with my new toy. This is the most amount of fun I can have without getting cited."

Jodie went to bed shortly after that but woke up sometime in the early hours of the morning to find Melissa sliding into bed beside her, she'd showered and her hair was still wet.

"Go back to sleep," Melissa patted her hip.

Jodie drifted off to sleep shortly after as Melissa put her arms around her and held her close.

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FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyover 3 years ago
No pressure packed so the living is easy

Smile ..... Easy going and a total relaxed girly ..... Smile

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
soooo good

Great , just really great , was baffled that Jodie didn't break down in laughter with the mini Mel thing... Had me in stitches...wondered if you actually named her so you could fit this remark in...Thank you for sharing your stories and telling them in such a unique way.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Too many breasts!

I loved this story right up to the point of the love-making. You used the word 'breast' or 'breasts' so many times it got repetitive rather than erotic. How about more imagery and perhaps more about the feelings created in both parties? There was also a confusing paragraph which seemed to imply J had four hands as she had already placed her hands on Melissa's magnificent mammaries but then you introduced another set of hands. Either that or I've read breasts so many times i've lost track of where we are on our sexual navigation! Despite this, I've liked the slow-burn growth of this story and particularly the curious, always cheeky dialogue instigated by Melissa. Not sure I like the dog being in the room. I had a lesbian relationship where my partner of the time doted over her dog and it was in the room as we made love. Worst experience of my life as it clambered on my exposed butt. Didn't put its tongue in my arse but that was a real passion killer!

jennifer4funjennifer4funalmost 6 years ago
Captivating

Your story just captivated me. The character development was very good, the storyline was interesting and the romance was sizzling. However, I felt like I was left hanging. Is there a chapter 4? I want to see what happens in Pittsburgh and with her Melissa's career.

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenalmost 6 years ago
I really enjoyed this chapter!

I really love the way you build the characters, and then slowly build the romance between them. This is an excellent series, and this chapter was well written. Thanks for sharing it with us!

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