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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

It was a fun read, but really, learn how to write correctly. Your sentence constructions is all wrong. When writing dialog, its totally wrong to write "i'll let you cum on me". She said.

It should be a single sentence separated by a comma.

"I'll let you cum on me", she said.

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