All Comments on 'My Colors are White and Gold'

by Turbidus

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Funtastic

That's wonderfull. Wish I could be there with You and I surely would stay afterwards in helping Your sweet Joe release her bladder and all

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Garbage

Not a single likeable character in this mess and just simply not a good or entertaining read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Very descriptive

Very descriptive and erotic. I would like to see more exploration of the characters and hear more about Josephine and whether 6 and 21 stayed.

secondsamuelsecondsamuelalmost 8 years ago
The highest compliment

I could not finished reading it the first time... I had to.. ahem... attend to issues more pressing in my pants

69stroker6969stroker69almost 8 years ago
Curious

Great story. I've had the desire for a scene as described here. I love cum and can never get enough. I'm still at the curious stage about piss play. The interest is strong. I'd love to find a group to introduce me to this fantasy. Thanks.

bk3rdbk3rdover 6 years ago
Enjoyed it, 5*s

Nice turn when Joe turned out to be Jo! Glad to see you have been a prolific writer. Will enjoy reading your material. Well written, more than just the (hot) sex, an unexpected and appreciated bonus.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Oh yes

I thought this was great, I would love to be able to do this with my hubby. I certainly came hard as I read your story

BiAussieCuckoldBiAussieCuckoldalmost 4 years ago
FUCK YESSS

That is one super HOT story. I loved that you introduced the wife at the end

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Life got awfully busy for a time. I hope to add a few stories again.