by Turbidus
That is one super HOT story. I loved that you introduced the wife at the end
I thought this was great, I would love to be able to do this with my hubby. I certainly came hard as I read your story
Nice turn when Joe turned out to be Jo! Glad to see you have been a prolific writer. Will enjoy reading your material. Well written, more than just the (hot) sex, an unexpected and appreciated bonus.
Great story. I've had the desire for a scene as described here. I love cum and can never get enough. I'm still at the curious stage about piss play. The interest is strong. I'd love to find a group to introduce me to this fantasy. Thanks.
I could not finished reading it the first time... I had to.. ahem... attend to issues more pressing in my pants
Very descriptive and erotic. I would like to see more exploration of the characters and hear more about Josephine and whether 6 and 21 stayed.
Not a single likeable character in this mess and just simply not a good or entertaining read.
That's wonderfull. Wish I could be there with You and I surely would stay afterwards in helping Your sweet Joe release her bladder and all