All Comments on 'My Cumslut Mum Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
"Maybe I should have let the dog fuck you as well then?" I smirked at her.

Just in case you are actually thinking of going that route, you might want to take a look at the site's guidelines. Bestiality is one of the prohibited subjects.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Good, but not exactly where I thought you were going after the last chapter

The ending of Chapter 3 seemed to be a set-up for him sharing her with his flatmates rather than some stranger. It's rather doubtful Mark would be able to keep his mouth shut. Of course, a threesome with mum and Kate also seemed in the cards.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Great story

Thanks so much, can't wait to read more, perhaps a threesome with his girlfriend..

prop69prop69almost 7 years ago
How can you say you love your Mom treat her like this

Fucking her is one thing. Passing her to other guys...no respect

Reb1861Reb1861almost 7 years ago

keep this going please

WatchTheBowWatchTheBowover 6 years ago
You're really f*cking up

It's clear you don't understand the genre your writing for. But who am I to tell you how to write? So instead I'm gong you leave you something to chew on:

Mother was sexually repressed for X years

Son lights her spark

Now she binge fucks sucks and swallows

See the issue here? You're letting a child go free in a candy shop. Restrain her, she shouldn't be leading her Dom anywhere. Never let her suggest anything. If she thought she might be able to fuck his flat mates. That should be a reward not just given...

If you just give in to whims where do you go next? That is 'what's erotica' craft a better and stronger story

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

I hope part 5 is soon. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Sequel

Looking forward to seeing how this goes from here. Maybe a co-ed gangbang.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
wowww

verrunner279 yahoo saysy hottt, ad id love to hear more about the dogg thing if that's possibleBob

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

I am surprised she didn't get knocked my friends and me put 3 in my mom cunt even got 2 into her ass we treaded her like slut and whore the 3 of us in her cunt.mom told me we knocked her up and said going to have mixed breed.she white and black cocks

annsubslutannsubslutabout 3 years ago
Made me cum reading it,

Loved the car journey and the walk in the park.

I KNOW she would enjoy the dog ( blush).

Thank you from another cumslut xx

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aalmost 3 years ago

The story was enjoyable and readable. However, I have to draw the line when it comes to abusing animals.

lovedefactolovedefactoover 2 years ago

Please continue this story!!! Very enjoyable

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Crap. How do you go from supposed deeply loving your mom to turning her into a whore. I know it's only a story but we know how your mind works. How could you ever respect her again?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Pimping out your mother - A real love story... NOT.

Complete piece of shit - both the son AND the story.

If only I could give this story zero stars, I surely would.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Would love to see part 5

114FSO114FSOover 1 year ago

Started out good. Then Chapter 3 went down hill like a ton of shit falling off a cliff. Chapter 4 was the splat as the shit hit the canyon floor. It's no longer about the mom and son. It's about the son abusing his mom, and eventually selling her skills to the rest of the school.

TEXASMADDOGTEXASMADDOGover 1 year ago

OOOHHH...so you are going to introduce some bestiality into this now!!?? Nasty thing, you...where is you mind, girl!!??

Mum CERTAINLY IS catching up on her lost chances from earlier in life! Ben is helping her out, quite well...

5 Stars...and lots of ☔ ☔ rain on the haters here!! If nothing else, the story is entertaining!

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