All Comments on 'My Cumuppance'

by irvlyn

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PickyKinkyPickyKinkyover 10 years ago
Good story let down by the last line...

Why does it have to be a dream sequence? Other than a lazy way to finish because you've used all your ideas on the sex.

Shame really!

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