All Comments on 'My Fair Slut Ch. 01'

i think that this story was excellent... i wish that my boyfriend would fuck me like that.... his cock is awsome but he is like a woman to get into bed... my pussy is so wet... this story almost got me off without even touching myself

I REALLY enjoyed this story. It was VERY VERY hot!

After we were done reading it to each other, I got her to suck me, and she begged me to fuck her as hard as Paul in the story. Thank you for a HOT story!!!

Very hot nasty story with great twist. Will have to read more.

I was really into this story up until the boss mastering Jim's wife. The male-submissive thing is totally a turn-off for me. Don't like cheating wives much either. Gee-darn. Started so hot for me.

This started good but isn't what I thought belongs in erotic horor.

I gave it 3 stars because I'm not too comfortable with the premise! Your writing is fine with very few errors and you have deftly set the scenes in an almost-believable format. I shall be a bit restive for a while about watching films borrowed from friends with hot submissive wives!

I believe you missed the part of this being fictional. Just imagine it's a MAGIC video tape.

Plagiarized premise

Just pathetic. Utterly hated it.

This is outstanding.

You write very well and you know how to work with the the subject matter.. Also you managed to give us enough backstory but yet didn't make us slog through a lot of mind-numbing set up before making it interesting. I think that is pretty hard to do.

Sure, it's a semi-familiar theme but I remember reading or maybe hearing a teacher say that there's really only a few plots in literature: man vs man, man vs nature and man vs himself. (OK, it was a long time ago. I'm sure I left something out and BTW, you can substitute "woman" anywhere "man" is in that description and it's still functionally equivalent)

I like it.