by regularguy13
This last snipet was even shorter than the rest, not much to even talk about.
It Seems You Only Write One Page At A Time To Make People Forget The Questions Left In Your Last Part.... Until Now I Can Forgive That. How In The Hell Did We Go From A Surprise Dick In The Ass To Family Dinner? I May Be On Drugs, But You Only Write The Parts You Know How To. At Least Attempt To Fill The Gaps, Or You Will Just Continue To Be An Idiot
I know the chapters (19) have been written, and are quite old from looking at the info at the beginning of each...
But, I am hoping you do not go too "off-the-rails" with the future submissions...this chapter was too weird, and is affecting the "FAMILY" dynamic too much...
They really have to stick together, keep the camp for the family, turn it into something more enticing than it is, keep it for the established patrons, and attract new one!!
**5** Stars...just because...