All Comments on 'My First Big Tits Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Keep going!

A very original plot, and I sincerely hope you will tell us more about Frau Schmidt, her daughter and her sister. Well done so far! Congratulations!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Would’ve loved John to have gotten more solo action in Annika’s bedroom and in more detail as well.

racfguyracfguyabout 4 years ago

The main character is 1) an asshole; 2) selfish; 3) a rapist - rapes GF, rapes GF's mother, a married woman, rapes best friend's GF, has best friend rape GF in the ass.

Just the kind of guy the Army does not want.

author: don't quit your day job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nice! Too bad it never concluded. I bet he was going to Germany to ger with Heidi. Kinda unrealistic though, that the army would actually send him to that country, much less that the base/outpost happens to be near Heidi's town.

But otherwise this was really good, I hope it gets the much awaited chapter 3 someday

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