by Fields of grass
A very original plot, and I sincerely hope you will tell us more about Frau Schmidt, her daughter and her sister. Well done so far! Congratulations!
Would’ve loved John to have gotten more solo action in Annika’s bedroom and in more detail as well.
The main character is 1) an asshole; 2) selfish; 3) a rapist - rapes GF, rapes GF's mother, a married woman, rapes best friend's GF, has best friend rape GF in the ass.
Just the kind of guy the Army does not want.
author: don't quit your day job.
Nice! Too bad it never concluded. I bet he was going to Germany to ger with Heidi. Kinda unrealistic though, that the army would actually send him to that country, much less that the base/outpost happens to be near Heidi's town.
But otherwise this was really good, I hope it gets the much awaited chapter 3 someday