All Comments on 'My First Task'

I have enjoyed this. It got me excited, it is well written and grammatically correct and it lacks the wandering apostrophe. I hope to learn more of the character as well as her exploits. Please keep going. I am still puzzling over an orgasm that can remain a secret from the photographer but which can be proved by one of his photographs. Perhaps my experience of the orgasm remains insufficient.

I'm ready for your next task too! God, to be able to be in a situation like that, would be amazing.