All Comments on 'My First Threesome Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
i love it!

I sure hope there is a part 2!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
I'm glad ...

...this is chapter 1. I can hardly wait for chapter 2. I've only been this wet with one or two other stories on Lit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Technical Competence (Writing Skills/grammar/etc.): 5 stars.

Story telling ability: 4 stars. Husband's desire for cuckolding not really brought out well. Wife's willingness to accompany her friend into a room for a threesome not well explained to this male reader (althougn I concede it may be something to do with two X chromosomes, like an inabilty to go the women's lavatory alone). I just don't get why she didn't leave before going into the room.

Subject matter: 2 stars. I just don't care for most husband watching cuckolding scenes.

Plus, I estimate new guy will give her something her husband can't: a vaginal orgasm, and that would bring the whole series down to one star.

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