by Bazzza
...this is chapter 1. I can hardly wait for chapter 2. I've only been this wet with one or two other stories on Lit.
Story telling ability: 4 stars. Husband's desire for cuckolding not really brought out well. Wife's willingness to accompany her friend into a room for a threesome not well explained to this male reader (althougn I concede it may be something to do with two X chromosomes, like an inabilty to go the women's lavatory alone). I just don't get why she didn't leave before going into the room.
Subject matter: 2 stars. I just don't care for most husband watching cuckolding scenes.
Plus, I estimate new guy will give her something her husband can't: a vaginal orgasm, and that would bring the whole series down to one star.