All Comments on 'My First Time'

As a white guy I am really turned on by this, getting a black guy to come over and fuck up my marriage and my life. God, thats so hot, of course the whole country just did the same thing, so bend over everybody, this is going to be so much fun.

Very nice. I really enjoyed that and envisioned it was my wife and I in the story. I don't think I can ever get her to do it, but this made a nice fantasy of it.

Gave me a hell of a hard on and I thought I might have to close the office door and finish it off.

I hope that you write more!

You have joined the world of cuckdom and wimpdom and your white wife now is a slut to a black man. Good luck, you are going to need it.

great fuck cuck story. heheeheh then he bitchs like the fucking fag he really is! :) He is such a fucking fool and by now we all know he loves these stories. Right ass w/o a name? Your mother tod us she has seen you jerking that little cock reading them. Your sistyer told us your little 3 inch cok gets so hard!!! So level with us ass w/o a name tells us all how much you love these stories. Come on now, once we all get done laughing we'll know you are really a fag in women's clothes.

The previous comment could only have been made by WWW, bad syntax, can't spell, foaming at the mouth ect. Anything he\she\it votes for can only be crap

Yep, another "tilted" rating due to the ranting of that idiot; "www". Now we have to balance out the score. Tsk, tsk..

Blame WWW for this the sick twisted twat. What is is beef anyway? doesn't he get enough with Bonnie?

There is nothing redeeming or worthwhile in this story except for the effort the author put into it. Sorry Senior, but this was a truly lousy story. The start was good; but it devolved into a meandering sexfest with no originality or real pathos. I'm not sure what you were aiming for but I don't see it.

The content was decent, but you kept switching tense, you went from telling in the third person to using the second person "you" and it got a little confusing.

And to the guy who thinks the country is fucked because it elected a black guy, I take that to mean you don't mind being fucked by white ones!!!!

You start out writing in first person and end up writing in third person. You need to make it one way or another, not both. Personally, I prefer first person as it started out with her telling the story.

I guess "senior perv" describes you well. I can understand Matt wanting to watch a guy fuck his woman, but why the humiliation along with it? This is bad shit. Don't write anymore.

I share the consensus that this is a lousy story. What annoys me the most (and it is one of the elements that adds to the improbability of the story) is that the black sob immediately calls the woman a slut as soon as he meets her and then the husband joins in with bitch and slut. Is there really a wife anywhere who wants to be so characterized?

A white wife and husband with no morals, character, or ethics. A woman who at best is a slut fucks a black man. My goodness she could have fucked anyone not her husband but it has to be a black man. You know all black men do is fuck white women who want to have black babies. You know the risk of all the diseases that run in the young black male population like HIV/AIDS just adds to the thrill. And after the black male has degraded the white woman and told her while fucking how useless and worthless she is, she naturally becomes a slave to black cock. Yes you used every by the numbers line you could in your story of two very stupid people, the husband and the wife. The other one thinks with his cock and since it got pussy his IQ is at least 100.

I dont care for this fetish and dont want to read about it, please label the stories correctly so that those with this fetish can find them.

Would love for my wife to do that too but was not successful in it. Try talking to her but so far it a no or why That why I married you, if I want to do that than I wouldn't married the wife said.

Her first time, his last.

And did not appear to be "for the sake of art " ... "you " especially

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Olfrog14x

I.R.!!!