All Comments on 'My Golden Summer with Blythe Ch. 01'

Anonymous USA

After reading this delightful well written story I came away liking it’s main characters Josh and Blythe. Since this is only Chapter 1, it’s nice to know we will have another chance to get to know them better in future chapters.

Maggie

and erotic!! Pity Blythe was so mean to him at the end - he didn't deserve that. Look forward to the next chapter so I can find out what happened next :)

Keep up the good work, I loved it.

You did it again, Buddle. Wonderful story.

This first chapter was a deftly written ascent of excitement and anticipation and a quick descent back down again. It leaves a lot to be discoveed in Chapter 2. I hope that we get to read it soon!

and so very well written. Sigh, a wonderful summer in the sun.

I enjoyed your story and hope you have another chapter or two.

Boyd

Thanks for directing me to this story - I enjoyed reading it and loved the long slow build up - almost like the long hot summer they were experiencing.

A very erotic scene at the end and I felt for Josh when she disappeared like that. I hope he gets to see her again.

janiexx

I really enjoyed story very much, very well written. I know I will enjoy reading other things by you. The way you wrote story was like you were the person in story.Keep up the good work.

Thanks Eddie

Liked the story gave it a five vote ...

Duddle:

But what the hell. it works both ways. A nice story and it's well written. I know I'll enjoy ch. 02. Thank You. Ronnie W.

Looking forward to reading more, sweetheart.

FtF

Finally had the time to read your story....nice one duddle!!!

Good read. This one left me wanting more . . . so, I intend to read the other chapters.

JH-1

I came to this story via your comment on Dinsmore's SUNDAY IN SAVANNAH. I detect a kindred romantic streak and writing ability.

Paul in Oklahoma