All Comments on 'My Hands are Tied'

by gothixpixie

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mel_pomenemel_pomeneabout 11 years ago
Teasingly short -

- and very promising! I think I am going to like this story very much - thank you for writing it and sharing with us and welcome to Literotica. This was a fine introduction - I look forward to reading much more. Four stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
A bit short but good

very good start, I would like to to be a bit more detailed. Can't wait to read more about the encounter as well as future ones

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Sensual and erotic, featuring consentual 'BDSM' with rough sex.

Can regular readers also expect 'Anal' sex upon demand?

gothixpixiegothixpixieabout 11 years agoAuthor
feedback

Thank you so much for the feedback guys. I can guarantee the anal aspects get more frequent. The degree of detail will improve.. I wrote this in a spare 20 minutes just to see how it went down. Appreciate any constructive feedback as I continue my story

Ice_Wallow12Ice_Wallow12about 2 years ago

Great short story. I know you said you wrote this quickly but try to remember what has been done before. It says he taped her mouth but then he deep throats her and nothing is said about the tape that should still be there. I just wanted to let you know for future stories to keep that in mind. I still loved it and can't wait for more from you.

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