All Comments on 'My Job as a Tester Ch. 01'

Great story. At first I was expecting a one page setup of the company with the early lack of details and was surprised at the length when I got to the bottom of the first page. You have a knack for being vague at first, then filling in details later so you aren't repeating yourself, such as what Mac said to the bartender.

I have to say, I think this is the first story I've read on Literotica with such a casual switch AB/DL theme. I wonder if the waitress will be more fleshed out later. Also wondering if why Mac is living with his sister and mom will be explored.

Looking forward to more!

TayJK

tayjk42@gmail.com

Great read. Topic interesting and well presented. An enjoyable journey. Will there be a chapter 2??

Although I gave it 5 stars, may I suggest you sit on stories an extra day or two, then retread for grammer. Keep writing, you have talent

SOMEONE HAS been doing some serious thinking on the story. 2 thru 5 should be out of this world.

I wouldn't mind volunteering there.

I would love Mac's job.