All Comments on 'My Journey to Submission Pt. 05'

Get dressed and head home. What are they going to do? You might detour to the hospital and have all the bruising recorded. The Police would be interested in what the women did to him. Stupid story with no consideration given to the fact that he held all the cards and the women's future in the palm of his hands. UGH!

Stupid story after Chapter 1. But really author, it gets old reading "Karen's Mom". Think you used that term 3 or 4 times in one paragraph. Give her a name or title or something. Seemed like every other sentence began with "Karen's Mom". Ugh!!!! It almost came to a point where it was unreadable. 1 star.

Keep going!

Love the story, hope birdie takes him

however we get it that it was 1970 in a midwestern university town, no need to mention that in every part

Not only are you a rubbish writer but you can't count.

"Karen's mom smiled at her and directed the three of them to follow her back into the living room."

There was Mary and Birdie as well as Karen's Mom so who was the other one.

Unbelievably bad. 1☆