All Comments on 'My Journey to Submission Pt. 06'

by davetoyboy

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rdoolittlerdoolittleover 8 years ago
Sounds delicious

The promised punishment should be memorable. Looking forward to it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
When Mary spread her legs?

He should have taken a big bite out of her and sent her to the hospital. That way this nonsense could have been over. Really bad story. Really dumb characters. 1 star.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
To the Anonymous commenter. . .

who keeps saying he should take a bite out of each woman: If you don't like this story, why do you keep reading each new chapter? If it's not your cup of tea, move on to the next story. My only complaint is that each chapter needs a lot of proofreading, but I like the story itself.

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