by OlderButtWiser
Very nice writing as to building the story and the structure..Lets have more of this relationship..
its much better than your previous story set in Mexico. I like the fact that the child is an integral component in the story. It will be interesting to see how you deal with the obvious complications to come. I sense from the title that the relationship is doomed, although based on this chapter one would not think so.
While I have read this story at LEAST one other time, I'm not sure if I recorded my comments and I'm too lazy to look.
No cheating in this story however it has all elements of erotic stories! I love the characters that you have created and I find myself cheering them on!
I would love to read what happens next. Just because the summer ends does not mean they have to part, does it?