All Comments on 'My Last Summer Romance Pt. 01'

by OlderButtWiser

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
GREAT STORY

Very nice writing as to building the story and the structure..Lets have more of this relationship..

michassmichassover 12 years ago
very good

its much better than your previous story set in Mexico. I like the fact that the child is an integral component in the story. It will be interesting to see how you deal with the obvious complications to come. I sense from the title that the relationship is doomed, although based on this chapter one would not think so.

ramonbrookramonbrookalmost 11 years ago
WOW ..... Probably my favorite story of all time

While I have read this story at LEAST one other time, I'm not sure if I recorded my comments and I'm too lazy to look.

No cheating in this story however it has all elements of erotic stories! I love the characters that you have created and I find myself cheering them on!

rightbankrightbankabout 10 years ago
Chapter 02 please

I would love to read what happens next. Just because the summer ends does not mean they have to part, does it?

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