by OlderButtWiser
I would love to read what happens next. Just because the summer ends does not mean they have to part, does it?
While I have read this story at LEAST one other time, I'm not sure if I recorded my comments and I'm too lazy to look.
No cheating in this story however it has all elements of erotic stories! I love the characters that you have created and I find myself cheering them on!
its much better than your previous story set in Mexico. I like the fact that the child is an integral component in the story. It will be interesting to see how you deal with the obvious complications to come. I sense from the title that the relationship is doomed, although based on this chapter one would not think so.
Very nice writing as to building the story and the structure..Lets have more of this relationship..