All Comments on 'My Lesbian Moms Ch. 01'

you do know what a lesbian is, right? fucking idiot you are.

Not bad would have liked a little more development ,as for the comment above ...forget them... Now keep writing!

Great theme or idea. Could have been much longer but oh well. Thanks for sharing.

I really like the story idea, but the mom & mom thing was confusing. I'd say the same thing if both women were named Mary. love to see it refined and longer. Keep going.

Hey dickhead anonymous, you know what erotic fantasy is right? Eat shit! For the writer, not bad

You started off with an interesting beginning.

Moved into a confusing Mom, Mommy,

Mother, Mom's Mess. Skipped any real

character depth.

And ended with a 30 second pity blow job....

It's an ok first attempt. But don't rush things

re-read through your future story's then set

them aside a few days come back to them

and do some fine tuning before submitting them.

Virgin at 18, lesbian parents, 44FF tits, for fuck's sake how about a believable story now & again.

Great idea and initial story and I know it will get better the more you submit.

The story was short and sweet. I'd like to read more.

Please update this amazing story!

The subject is incest. Having his lesbian step mom is not incest!!!

Wrong category. Getting head from his mother's wife is not incest. Might fit better in erotic coupling, just about.

Please include son sex with biological mom in next chapters

As a romantic, who especially enjoys mutually consensual incest, I find no emotional connection between Beth and Chris. The sexual act performed in this story seemed like nothing more than a pity lay. Beth is performing the act simply to keep her wife happy.

yeah not bad story but step mom is not incest.