All Comments on 'My Life Had Changed'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Another Naked Weekend

Seems in order...

Great story...but you can't leave that tease dangling and not flesh it out... lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Too silly for words.

And drop the "it's true" bit. It does nothing for the story. You're on a porn site on the world wide web. No one believes a word coming out of your mouth. Then try to come up with something new. A bit of originality or cleverness wouldn't hurt either. This just made me laugh it was so bad.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great Story

A second chapter is in order. Maybe a continuation of Teed Off On also. Your call.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
This works.

You have a fine open-ended setup going. Run with it!

addammsaddammsalmost 7 years ago
Frightening

This story is frightening in the same sense that scary movies are. I keep coming back to your stories because they have enough realism to have actually happened. Intense, erotic, and, apparently, true.

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