by joan658
I love the idiomatic writing--I can hear the Southern accent as I read this. Wonderful descriptions, wonderful scenario.
Great story. Almost a 5 except if she was using"ten inch dildo" her cherry was gone.
I love to read happy stories like this one and it was very hot one also. It really could of been true also.
I could picture every thing that was said in this story. It was very well written and when it was climaxed I swear I was too. Keep writing, you sure have a nack for this. I especially like how you got into the story, you did not jump right into the sex, you set it up and it all came together, again and again and again. Great work !
Joan, your story got me so wet and then I soaked the chair used at my computer. Sure hope you enjoyed parts of the story in real life. I know I would join you in your cabin.
luv,
Jacki
Damn it Joan, You are the hottest and best writer on this sight. You certainly know how to give a guy a hard on. You are awesome. Do you get wet when you write these stories?
This is honestly one of the better writer I've read in a long time. You don't jump straight in, but set up a story. It's slightly fanciful, but what literotica isn't. But it does seem like it could potentially happen.
Story was sweet and funny at the same time as well sexy as hell.
You said in your Bio that men wanted to see your pussy and showed it, I am more interested in seeing your puffy nipples.
While reading your story I could feel myself getting hard wishing I was a female with all the kissing, licking and fucking it must be great to be a girl.
Excellent! Great story telling. Great Character development. Wonderful setup of the story. Great Sex. I wouldn't be surprised if you told me this was a story from your past, it was so well told. If this is not a true story, you have a great imagination. One of the best stories I have read. Chapter 2? Now that Lee has enjoyed what sex can be, there are additional directions you can take this story. I am going to see what else you have submitted I enjoyed this so much.