All Comments on 'My Midnight Surprise'

Your story had me aroused the whole way through. It hits at the heart of one of my favorite taboo fantasies.

I hope he comes back for more!

.crude and amateurish

Good start, needs quite a bit of work.

A first person take on rape has dramatic potential. But you throw it away early on with the classic "Dirty slut/ but she's enjoying it" scenario so the tension is gone before it starts.

Absolutely wonderful. I was turned on through the whole thing. I enjoy your writing style greatly. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more of your stories.

It needed to be a tad longer. Maybe more interaction between captor and captive. Perhaps something more with the knife?? It was hot but needed a little something. You have a good writing style, easy to read and not distracting. Keep writing.

Awesome, haha, thank you. You really went with the more female fantasy sort of story. Most of them seem to describe what the woman is doing/looks like, and not so much about the man. It's appreciated :)

He should have cum in her pussy, not on her breasts.