Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click here
When all was said and done, we rested in a huge heap, making angels in cum that was spread upon the floor.
Before I drifted off completely I heard the brothers talk again.
"You have improved vastly since I left." Oluth said acknowledging his brother's impressive, if not quite so overwhelming performance.
"Not as much as you. These pleasurelings have done more for you then I could have ever hoped to learn. You are Herd Leader now. Guide our people with strength and passion and wisdom, Oluth."
"I shall." Oluth nodded solemnly. "Tomorrow we face the soldiers and... 'Admirers'... who have been pursuing me."
"And Oluth..." Aryth added before moving elsewhere to retire. "Thank you. I fought bitterly to rule, and I was a fool to do so. It has worn heavily on me ever since. I should have known it was your right all along to be our king."
"How could you have known?" Oluth protested.
"The gods granted you the scepter, brother." Aryth chuckled.
As I drifted into dream, I wondered how my Minotaur would handle the oncoming hoards.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 13 years agoI'm sorry if the sex ran out of steam a little for you... The biggest challenge I run into finding new ways to describe old action, and thinking up new action to describe. This problem would be solved if I didn't feel the need to be so explicit about my sex... the conundrum is that I respect subtler more poetic language when it comes to sex creatively superior to what I do (when it is done right) but that even with that respect it tends to bore me.
But I appreciate the rest of your kind words, and hopefully I'll find a way to keep it interesting for you in the last chapter.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoReally enjoyed that, thought it was a suitably heroic climax to Oluth's story (note that I called it Oluth's, it was interesting to have pretty much all the character development happen to someone other than the first-person narrator, not bad, just interesting). I really loved Tia, I even enjoyed the girl-on-girl stuff in Ch7, when usually lesbian sex just bores me. Just one little thing - the "breed-off" in this last installment was exciting but a bit too same old, same old, like you ran out of puff a wee bit. You're a great writer and I think you could have created a bit more of a sense of occasion than you did. But, other than that, two thumbs up!
Anonymousover 13 years agoI'm glad you enjoyed! I don't have any idea why my fans became so divided on Oluth being taken down a peg, but I've been doing my best to give something to both camps.
The next chapter is going to be the last full chapter. There will be a short epilogue which may not be on literotica for a while.
I'm also considering an eventual spin-off focusing on Valsivale, but that will be some time down the road if I do it.
I'd encourage any feedback you have on what you'd like to see, of course.
Thanks for commenting!
Anonymousover 13 years agoI liked the resolution with Oluth's exile and the trials in this chapter. Will Aryth stick around? I'd like to see how the girls handle having two big bulls around.
I don't like Tia and I was glad to see her fade into the background in this chapter. I can't wait for chapter 10. How much longer is the series?
