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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
I love Raye & Janie

I love the mother and daughter duo. Would love to do both of them!, Thanks

loveable_guyloveable_guyover 6 years ago
Proof read your work

There are commas needed, quotation marks and make sure the pronouns match. Hell, if you need someone, I'll volunteer. You have a good story line, but it needs some work that won't piss off guys like me.

You still need 2 others involved; Raye and her daughter need to dance and have sex on stage, and Raye and her son.

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